At first glance, the title is very eye catching and readable as it has a thick outline and the font is bigger than that of the body text. The body text on the other hand, is difficult to read especially on a white background. Instead of serif, the body text should use san serif as the text would look cleaner and easier to read. In addition, it would be better to fill the text with black colour so that it could be easier to read against a white background.
In addition, the body paragraph is center-aligned and the starting point of each line of words is not consistent which makes it hard to read. To improve, It should be left-aligned so that the reader can follow through from line to line easily.
The spacing between the words “TEMPOR.NUNC” in the sixth line is off and the two words are sticking together. The kerning should be increased to make the two words more distinguished.
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